Sorry that this is a repost. I'm such a LJ newb that I didn't know how to format with cuts and such until my friend explained. Ah, so embarrassing!
I'm new to writing fiction (as well as LJ!), as I ordinarily do non-fiction. So this is my first fic, and I greatly appreciate any feedback on how I could improve.
Title: War Bride (Chapter 1)
Author: thislilchicken, originally published on FF.net by me, under the same name
Fandom: Hetalia
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama/Romance
Spoilers & Desirable Foreknowledge: Knowledge of Taiwanese history may be helpful, not required
Warnings: Deals with controversial historical events; I can't stress enough that I am neither directly supporting nor denouncing various countries.
Pairings: JapanxTaiwan
Disclaimer: I don't own Hetalia.
Summary: Ever-feisty Taiwan has always been tossed back and forth between two powerful men, Japan and China. What is she to them? A little sister? A future bride in training? Are they in it for her or for themselves? From Japanese Occupation and onwards to 2010.Author’s Note: Constructive feedback is greatly appreciated, even if it is just to say that you
didn't like the characterization and style of writing, and
why. I'm new to writing fiction, and I feel lost as to whether or not this is good or bad characterization and plot pacing. 多謝!
Chapter 1 (Meeting Big Brother)
Chapter 2 (Growing Pains)
Chapter 3 (The Talk)